Rough mix of an idea I'm working up

[mjtripper]

I usually work on much lighter stuff and this is the first heavier thing I've done in a while. Just posting what I have so far to get some feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/mjtripper/fjm

[dvscool]

Its hard to comment, cause you could go so many places with the main rif. Sounds like it could be coolness though dude..

[Trem]

Cool man, has the feel of Ancient Fates Warning or something. Epic type old school.