okidoki.m4a

[z1n]

ok I made this very poorly but want some input on it as I am stuck. The drums are just looped as well as the rythme (you can hear wrong note in this loop). There are 2 breakdowns and everything is layered and its short. My question is should I continue making break downs? I think the lack of vocals are making it hard for me to structure something of any length. Anyway let me know what I can do to improve and please keep in mind that I have no lead skillz (which is what got me to make this in the first place).

http://www.z1n.com/public-files/okidoki3.m4a (you might want to right click and "save target" so it plays smooth)