song me and dude did over the internet :)

[Bigfknbang]

hey every one, me and a dude i know recorded a song over the internet, he did all the music and i did the lyrics and vocals. tell us what you think here is his link

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/...21&alid=-1

if his link doesnt work i also have it on my soundclick page.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/go...eddermusic.htm


here are the lyrics i wrote for it.

holes left in my skin..stains of my addictive sin. for everyone to see...the floor is shaking my world unstable..i have surendered to apathy and i dont care...lost in a blank stare..left with my cold heart..now only a silent soul.. with a mind twisted by thoughts i cant controll! in mysery my viens feel.. like acid flowing through! my life has been mastered by a souless demon screaming constantly!! my focus is on one thing...cant get to a new dream...a whore for another score..a whore for another score...i remember crying with no sound...im still waiting all alone! everytime you said you'd be there, every time you said you'd be there..LIES!!!!!!!the floor is shaking...the experiance is always the same...surrendered to apathy...my life has been mastered by a souless demon!!! i remember... i remember...my focus is on one thing..i cant get to a new dream... a whore for another score...i remember...crying with no sound... blind i guess?? im still waiting alone! the floor is shaking..barricading...i surrender to apathy.. i dont care...lost in a blank stare.. left with nothing!!holes in my skin....stains of my my addictive sin...my heart is shaking...my world unstable...i have surrendered to apathy...

(©gothmetalshredder/the4given 2004 )