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[Cloud Strife]

Hey guys i finally wrote a own song

the last solo is done in one take and is totally improvised so it might be a little sloppy

here it is:

http://members.lycos.nl/shakeel2001/Termination.mp3

Let me now what you think of it

[ZeNo]

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[img]images/icons/shocked.gif[/img]
awsome! really nice playing and lead tone....i dont like the rythm tone, its a bit muddy..
and the flutes are funny [img]graemlins/laugh.gif[/img]

[DRH]

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Nice!

I like your playing. Almost a middle eastern feel. I think of Aladdin if he listened to metal.


DRH

[Cloud Strife]

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Hehe thanks guys [img]graemlins/toast.gif[/img]

DRH, cool that you find the song eastern sounding, that's what i tried to do in this song

[JacksonJuiceBox]

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Thats cool, very nice playing. The rhythm tone is a bit muddy though. Other than that very nice

[rodrigo_echeverri]

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that's funny and cute...

you gotta tell your technical info for the recording though... that explains things usually...

[ April 23, 2003, 03:06 AM: Message edited by: rodrigo_echeverri ]

[Cloud Strife]

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Thanks for the comments dudes, i need to tweak the rythym sound a little more to get it less muddy, i'm quit pleased with the lead tone tough [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

ok here it goes rodrigo:

guitar:charvel model 4
souncard: soundblaster live
amp (modeler): v-amp 2
recording program: Cool edit pro 2.0
drums: steinberg b.box

the flutes at the beginning are jazz flute samples

[Alexi7]

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Excellent work. The trem work is very satrianish, the song is very tasteful, Congrats.

[Cloud Strife]

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Hey alexi thanks for the comment man

cool that you enjoyed the song [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

[eet_fuk_81]

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hey dude, that's pretty damn sweet! really cool song man, nice playing. Glad to see that charvel sounds as great as it looks [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img] ! [img]graemlins/headbang.gif[/img]

[Cloud Strife]

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Thanks dude ! [img]graemlins/headbang.gif[/img]

yeah man i love the charvel model4 [img]graemlins/notworthy.gif[/img]

[rEs]

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This is a REALLY great song! Please make it into an epic!!

-i suggest repeating the dive bomb throughout the song and make it part of the pre-chorus or lead, it could be a theme. Great stuff. Wow.

-the Rhythm guitar sound interferes with the lead sound

-great playing throughout, I think the reverse-gated reverb is VERY effective on this song!!

-dude, why is the guitar 180 degrees out of phase?

[rodrigo_echeverri]

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Shak.. I was re-listening to this and I like it better now than I did before... I think it is a nice piece of work on the make...

However, I think you need either a little mixer or a better sound card or both... I can hear a lot of digital clipping... I think you can probably run again through your mix, normalize the drums and then work the levels of the other tracks from there...

[ May 10, 2003, 09:48 PM: Message edited by: rodrigo_echeverri ]

[Ric1983]

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I was reminded of the days of larger than life guitars via 80's. Great Egyptian type feel also ala Egypt(The Chains are on). Nice Lead tone as well. A very good piece in my opinion thanks for sharing with the forum. I look forward too more
in the future.


Ric

[Cloud Strife]

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Hey guys thanks for your kind words and your great advices!

My compu speakers are blowing when i'm playing heavy ryhtym parts [img]images/icons/mad.gif[/img] very annoying..
The drums are cut/ paste and they don't flow to much (i looped them bad i guess [img]images/icons/tongue.gif[/img] )


@rEs i don't understand that phasing thing? (my English isn't to good [img]images/icons/wink.gif[/img] )

I'll record the song again, now with some new ideas and hopefully better ryhtym tone and better drums