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[abnertnt03]

Hey, Check out this recording, give me some feedback

I recorded it with a Line 6 HD head, Fender Master Built, Boss DR-770 and a PC.

Let me know what you think.

MARK ABNER - ANATHEMA

[ November 08, 2003, 04:44 PM: Message edited by: abnertnt03 ]

[Freehill]

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Very nice [img]images/icons/grin.gif[/img]

[bigboy]

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Very "spooky" sounding. Nice.

[HuntinDoug]

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Cool Bro...Keep it up [img]graemlins/headbang.gif[/img]

[abnertnt03]

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Big boy....what part of Ohio you from? Cincy here....

[bigboy]

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Canton area sir.

[diablomozart]

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very cool...needs bass tho... [img]images/icons/grin.gif[/img] d.m.

[abnertnt03]

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Please more feedback before I post my next song...Another track coming soon....

[EVHwannabe]

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Very nice tune, playing, and production.

[Annah]

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Nice work Mark. It sounds like your technical skills are pretty sharp. My main thought on it is that it could use a bit more dynamics and "travel" more. It just seems to have the same feel throughout, which IMHO should be broken up with some changes.

Take us on more of a journey! Put some dynamics in there.

Sounding good so far. I'm looking forward to hearing your next track.

Annah

[abnertnt03]

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Thanx annah.....Only problem is its a drum machine....and they are not so easy to program....I spend more time playing than with the drum machine.....so it is basic for that reason.....Wish I had a killer drummer with v drums.....Then I could do alot of technical time changes.....Its hard to record drums in a small area and a pc....thats why I used the Boss dr-770.....so my next tune may bore you some...I should definatly hone my drum machine skills....Thanx for listening....Im shopping for better machines all the time.... [img]graemlins/scratchhead.gif[/img]

[Outlander]

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I agree with Annah,needs variation with the theme.Lyrics would really help bring this out.
You're geting a really good sound out of that drum machine I like the kicks especially.At .13 and 2.15 the intro and outro guitar sounds like it may be just a hair flat. It's really hard to keep all the instruments tuned to each other when doing layers,especially if you do it over a couple of days or so.It seemed at least on my crappy comp. speakers here at work that the bottom end was clipping starting at .55, posible oversaturation [too hot of a signal].
I really like the feel of the tune but it sounds like the middle or end section to me where it is building or climaxing.Lyrics or a softer section in the begining would make this even more powerfull and dynamic!
I like it let's hear more [img]graemlins/headbang.gif[/img]

[Outlander]

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Sorry I hit the post button before I wanted to.
I didn't hear any bass guitar is there one on it?

[petedz]

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That was really good. I'd echo some things that were already said: add a bass track and mix up the drums and rhythm guitars a bit more. It repeats too much.

Some of the quick bits sound pretty wicked. [img]graemlins/toast.gif[/img]

[abnertnt03]

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Please more feedback...