Wrting a new song. Want your input.

[Wadester]

Hi there,
I'm came up with this little diddy yesterday and I liked it so I recorded it. I think it may have some potential but I'm a little stuck. It only has rythm and some vocals but it's in need of a nice solo and a good ending, but I'm not much of a soloist.
I was wondering if any of you have the time, you could check out the song and give me a few ideas.

It will autoplay on my myspace page.

www.myspace.com/wadehavens
Thanks!!

-Wade

[anuske9]

It made me think of collective soul.. That's all I got.
That's not true, I do play lead but I've never recorded anything before.
Let me know the key and I'll get back to you.

[Wadester]

It made me think of collective soul.. That's all I got.
That's not true, I do play lead but I've never recorded anything before.
Let me know the key and I'll get back to you.

Yeah, I guess it does sound a little like Collective Soul. That's cool I guess.

The song is in the key of "E". The part I guess you can call the bridge starts with a "B" chord. The guitar is all pretty simple.