"Be gentle, it is my first time."

[jgcable]

Re: "Be gentle, it is my first time."

Ok, a little tough love bro..
Mix-- horrible (but nice and clear) but your intentions are very good.
Playing--- ugh... the timing is off... nuf said.
Guitar sound-- a little compressed but not too bad
Style--- I am thinking early Priest, like Sad Wings of Destiny.
Song--- I like it. It is a good song with alot of potential if recorded, produced and played correctly.
Keep working at it. Start with a good drum track and go from there. I like the vocal panning and the 2 different guitar sounds. Bass sounds pretty good. My suggestion is to dump it totally and record it over starting from scratch. I wish I was closer, I would help you. If you use Cool Edit Pro 2.0 I could record some guitar tracks and email them to you. Thanks for sharing bro.. John G

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Re: "Be gentle, it is my first time."

Thanks, John - there's more love in your post than toughness, and I appreciate the time. Lots of stuff to work on.

About the mix - could you pick, say, the first three things about it that come to mind as being horrible?

Thanks again,
Keith

[jgcable]

Re: "Be gentle, it is my first time."

I can't wait to here the new version.