Rosewood Smoking new tune...

[Daywalker]

Guys and Gals,

Thanks to everyone who listened to "Reconcile" and even more thanks to those who left such encouraging comments. It really touched me.

Here is my latest composition:

http://www.riffworld.com/Members/loadstar/bush-fire/

If you like it - please leave a "shout" in the shout box at the bottom.

It's currently entered into Sonoma's Riff-Rumble 11: Heat-wave song competition.

Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to listen to this.
I hope you like it.

Alex (aka Daywalker and Loadstar)

PS: Check out the cool Jackson and Me pose picture headshot on my Riffworld Profile Home page

[MartinBarre]

Nice stuff there mate. Good riffing. The rythm tone is a bit thin but it's very well done.

[Daywalker]

Martin - Thanks for listening and the constructive critiscim.
When you say thin, do you think its the sound or the absence of a bass line?
Any feedback is great...
Thanks!
Alex.

[MartinBarre]

I can't get turning it up loud cos the baby and wife are asleep, but I'd guess from re-listening to it, the lack of bass is a problem. The riff is not based around thick chords, so it's more noticable that there's not much bottom end.
Buy yourself a cheap bass, you can get them dirt cheap on ebay and it's good fun messing around with them on your tracks.